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PRE-PRODUCTION FEEDBACK
After presenting our pre-production materials we were given feedback on how to improve them.
I was told to simplify my campaign message in my product analysis document as it was not clear. To fix this, I will re-write the campaign message section to say that "G-Fuel gives you energy".
I was told to separate my advertising budget and my production budget table into two separate tables focusing on each aspect.
My campaign schedule was made of two paragraphs. To make it better, I created a more clear and more detailed campaign schedule which included a table of specific dates with less writing.
After presenting our pre-production materials we were given feedback on how to improve them.
I was told to simplify my campaign message in my product analysis document as it was not clear. To fix this, I will re-write the campaign message section to say that "G-Fuel gives you energy".
I was told to separate my advertising budget and my production budget table into two separate tables focusing on each aspect.
My campaign schedule was made of two paragraphs. To make it better, I created a more clear and more detailed campaign schedule which included a table of specific dates with less writing.
We did not address the regulatory body and advertising code of conduct during the pre-production stage. To sort this out I've created a document addressing the organisations responsible for regulating adverts and how they're input and guidelines could effect our advertisement.
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